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Balancing
On my imaginary line, I tried to
hush my steps...
So no-one would hear me fall.
©2006-2009 ~Sorced
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Submitted: July 27, 2006
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I'm going to post an actual comment instead of these smiley comments, because I bet they didn't even know what to say...

Anyway, I like the vocabulary you used to make the light and airy atmosphere, like "hushed" and "imaginary." It really gives off this solitary and secluded vibe. Nice work. :)

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The rythmic aspect of this is also quite nice, the emphesis put on the subject, "balancing" by having it on a seperate line,m also helps to enforce the secluded vibe Junkie spoke about.

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